I find myself to be a lot like Shirley, because I too struggle with assignments that require me to write original papers based on textual sources. I find it easier writing opinion base papers because then I can add personal experiences in. Unlike others in this class reading these articles didn't make me feel like I could do this assignment now. I'm still a bit confused on what we are doing and I am finding myself a bit overwhelmed by it.
I do however like the fact that Swales gave you step by step directions in order to come up with a good research introduction. I think the Create a Research Space model (Cars) is pretty helpful. I never really found it hard to write introductions for papers, but that mainly is because they were opinion and personal base papers. But now that I'm in this class I see how the Cars model can help me to write a great introduction.
Even though Kantz didn't help me to come to a realization about what you want for the paper I do feel as if the article was very informing. A quote that stuck out to me was "reading sources rhetorically gives students a powerful tool for creating a persuasive analysis." She goes on to say that there is no proof that this is true, but I believe that it could actually be true.
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Monday, May 9, 2011
Annoying Ways People Use Sources
The opening of this article made me want to read it. I love how he compares slow driving to sloppy writing. I for one HATE slow drivers, so I can imagine how irritated he is. I like the quote he used as to why people don't use quotations right. "There are two explanations for why some don't use quotations right. they don't know how, or they don't care" I really believe this to be true, because unlike people that drive slow; when it comes to writing in college majority of people have been writing papers all of there lives. So knowing where to put quotations is something that is learned. So when it comes down to writing the paper if you don't put them in the right spot, I think of it more as you don't care or maybe you just really didn't know. But if it's something you don't know you can always look it up, so you can look at it as them not caring where the "quotations" are. I like how he included examples of the wrong way to place quotations and then provided the right way to do it. All and all I thought this was a great article and it kept me engaged.
Wednesday, April 27, 2011
Genre
I found these articles difficult for me to understand. None of the quotes really stuck out to me, I did find one to be interesting though. “It is not that a writer merely functions within a context, but that a writer participates in the construction of that context.” To me what this means is that Writing aren't solely based on context, but then I thought well when you read something in order to understand it you have to understand the context of the story. But in order to understand the context you have to read for understanding. Now that I better understand what genre is I believe that context and genre go hand and hand.
Thursday, April 21, 2011
April 20
I liked these article best out of the ones we have read on discourse. The reason being is because John and Harris challenge the idea of discourse, and they give you both a negative and positive side of it.
“ …First, many people have chosen to be members of one discourse communities, groups with whom they share social, political, professional, recreational interest” (John) I like this quote because to me it seems as if he saying that people choose to be apart of a community based on their interest, and not because their family belonged to it. When we first started talking about communities I was led to believe that people chose them based on where their family belonged, I now see that the people apart of the communities have common interest.
There seem to me two warnings here. The first is that, since it has no “positive opposing” term, community can soon become empty and sentimental word.” (Harris) This really stood out to me because in pass articles they led me to believe that being apart of a community would be great and it would help me socially and academically. But Harris is leading me to be that it's not all that. It also makes me realize that just because people have similar interest, that's not enough to keep a community going.
I think we spent so much time on these articles, so we can form our own opinion about discourses,communities, ecologies. Just because someone wrote an article about them doesn't mean we have to agree with what they're saying. You need to learn to form your own opinion and in order to do that, you need pros and cons. That's why i enjoyed these two articles best.
“ …First, many people have chosen to be members of one discourse communities, groups with whom they share social, political, professional, recreational interest” (John) I like this quote because to me it seems as if he saying that people choose to be apart of a community based on their interest, and not because their family belonged to it. When we first started talking about communities I was led to believe that people chose them based on where their family belonged, I now see that the people apart of the communities have common interest.
There seem to me two warnings here. The first is that, since it has no “positive opposing” term, community can soon become empty and sentimental word.” (Harris) This really stood out to me because in pass articles they led me to believe that being apart of a community would be great and it would help me socially and academically. But Harris is leading me to be that it's not all that. It also makes me realize that just because people have similar interest, that's not enough to keep a community going.
I think we spent so much time on these articles, so we can form our own opinion about discourses,communities, ecologies. Just because someone wrote an article about them doesn't mean we have to agree with what they're saying. You need to learn to form your own opinion and in order to do that, you need pros and cons. That's why i enjoyed these two articles best.
Monday, April 18, 2011
April 18
Wardle relates to ecologies because it deals with communication and writing in a specific community. Wardle talks about writing in engineering. People that are in that community will be very familiar with the writing and be able to understand the discourse."At times, however, participation in new communities requires accepting for oneself identities that are at odds with the values of other communities to which one belongs (Lave and Wenger; Russell, "Rethinking") When people choose to be a part of another community they are then choosing to participate in the norms that they have set for that community.
Wednesday, April 13, 2011
April 13
I think you had us read these articles together because they each talk about a different form of writing. Although they are different from each other they compliment each other also when it come to writing.
The writing that I prefer most is the rhetoric writing, because I feel like whenever you're writing a paper you're using persuasion. Trying to persuade them to like your writing so you can get a good grade.
Correct me if I'm wrong but it seems as if discourses focus on your environment, and although that can play a big factor in writing an article or paper it doesn't influence it much.
But after reading Boyd and Gees articles I'm still lost on discourses. So maybe that's why I'm all for rhetoric writing.
The writing that I prefer most is the rhetoric writing, because I feel like whenever you're writing a paper you're using persuasion. Trying to persuade them to like your writing so you can get a good grade.
Correct me if I'm wrong but it seems as if discourses focus on your environment, and although that can play a big factor in writing an article or paper it doesn't influence it much.
But after reading Boyd and Gees articles I'm still lost on discourses. So maybe that's why I'm all for rhetoric writing.
Monday, April 11, 2011
Resume Writing
The first time I wrote a resume' I wasn't exactly sure what to put in it and what not to put in it. After finding out those things it became easier for me to write although I didn't have much to put on there yet. I have wrote resumes' for different classes and depending on the class I have to format it differently. That was something that has always confused me when it comes to actually handing my resume in for a job. Out of all the ways I have been shown I have stuck to just one format now. I realize thing I need to include and things I need to omit from it.
Monday, April 4, 2011
Charron's April 4th repsonse
I think we are studying design in this class, because when writing it’s not just about the content of the writing but also how it looks. Not only does it need to sound professional but it also needs to look professional. Many times people judge something based upon its attractiveness before even getting to the content. . Design is important because the design can appeal to you audience and make your audience want to know more or it can make your audience very bored and uninterested. By implementing good design we are trying to make someone's first impression of our resume and/or cover letter a good one. This is because we know that for many people, a first impression can make or break their interest or it can lead someone to make a judgment about something that may or may not be true. For example if 20 people apply for a job and have a boring resume, the person with the best design will more likely be looked at by the employer. They will want to know more about them, and want to engage in a conversation with them because their resume may have told a large part about their personality.
Learning design can be important for various reasons. There are many reasons design is important because it build creativity. Building creativity allows you to become a more effective writer and allows you to write different genres and keep people engaged. Design also allows you to describe your point of views in different ways and allows people to be more interested. Good design starts with the proper use of contrast, repetition, alignment and proximity. It is also important to use harmonious colors, a font that embodies the character of the writing, and to work on a grid. What looks good to one person may not look good to another, but the basic principles hold true.
My major is Family Studies, and with this I plan to be a counselor. Visual design would be important in this profession because it could help attract people to your business. You can also use it when It comes to designing your work place.
Wednesday, March 30, 2011
March 30th
Reading is an important part of writing, because unless you understand what you're writing about there is no way for it to be good. You can't write a paper about a subject with out reading up on it. In order for me to improve my reading, I need to actually read for understanding and not to find answers to questions. I also need to learn how to read like the writer, so I can actually write a good response.
" When you read like a writer you work to identify some of the choices the author made so that you can better understand how such choices might arise in your own writing" "As you read in this way, you think about how the choices the author made and the techniques they used can influence your own responses as a reader." ( Bunn 72) What this means to me is that you don't have to read for understanding as I previously stated, but you need to put yourself in the authors shoes, in order to really understand what the reading is about. When you understand what the reading is about then you can write a great response to it.
" Talking with your professors and peers about texts can not only help you understand your readings better, but it can push your thinking and clarify your own stances on issues that really matter to you." (Rosenberg 212) I like this quote because this is something I learned personally that actually helps you. When I do a reading by myself I don't understand it as well as I would if I talked to someone else about it. That doesn't just works for readings but movies also. I like to get other peoples opinions and thoughts about a reading because they help me to form my own thoughts. When you talk with people about the reading it helps you to form your response paper to it.
Both of these article taught me how to better understand what i'm reading. When I can understand what Im reading I can write a better paper on it. I also feel as though I actually know what I read and I can have a conversation about it.
" When you read like a writer you work to identify some of the choices the author made so that you can better understand how such choices might arise in your own writing" "As you read in this way, you think about how the choices the author made and the techniques they used can influence your own responses as a reader." ( Bunn 72) What this means to me is that you don't have to read for understanding as I previously stated, but you need to put yourself in the authors shoes, in order to really understand what the reading is about. When you understand what the reading is about then you can write a great response to it.
" Talking with your professors and peers about texts can not only help you understand your readings better, but it can push your thinking and clarify your own stances on issues that really matter to you." (Rosenberg 212) I like this quote because this is something I learned personally that actually helps you. When I do a reading by myself I don't understand it as well as I would if I talked to someone else about it. That doesn't just works for readings but movies also. I like to get other peoples opinions and thoughts about a reading because they help me to form my own thoughts. When you talk with people about the reading it helps you to form your response paper to it.
Both of these article taught me how to better understand what i'm reading. When I can understand what Im reading I can write a better paper on it. I also feel as though I actually know what I read and I can have a conversation about it.
Introduction
Hi my name is Charron Otis. I am a 4th year here at Ohio University, from Akron, Ohio. I am majoring in Family Studies and plan to be a counselor once I'm finish with school.
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